really nice poem written for someone you obviously care about a lot. noteable lines taken out of context: "i am the sea to your sky"; the last four lines of the first stanza; "i must still be alive somehow after all"; "the crash and froth below make my pen drift, and planets are forming".
the picture is very synergistic with the poem and the type fits well.
mostly, i like the hopeful attitude of the thing, though given to the other still spills over onto the author.
Wow - it's all so beautiful. The photo and poem are one.
ReplyDeleteReally, really beautiful. :)
ReplyDeletereally nice poem written for someone you obviously care about a lot. noteable lines taken out of context: "i am the sea to your sky"; the last four lines of the first stanza; "i must still be alive somehow after all"; "the crash and froth below make my pen drift, and planets are forming".
ReplyDeletethe picture is very synergistic with the poem and the type fits well.
mostly, i like the hopeful attitude of the thing, though given to the other still spills over onto the author.
thanks, everyone
ReplyDeletei'm honored that people continue to read and make comments.
^_^
delusionist made some good observations - is he related?
ReplyDelete