Friday, March 17

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A diamond in the rough
Gets whittled down quick enough
Hospital, cemetery or jail

Like every fine wine
We spoil given enough time
Hospital, cemetery or jail

Somewhere down that road
Whichever direction you go
Hospital, cemetery or jail

Biding my dwindling years
What in the hell am I doing here
Hospital, cemetery or jail

Children growing
Age lines showing
Hospital, cemetery or jail

With all your money
And your friends in high places
Hospital, cemetery or jail

The promise of youth
Always ends in one truth
Hospital, cemetery or jail.

2 comments:

JOVIAN said...

Actually, it's always a cemetery, but i like the homage and the flow of the poem.

p.s. I don't think the second to last line needs italicizing to achieve effect. 'course, writers perogative.

Metamatician said...

Yeah, you're right. Looks better without.

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