TURAMBAR. His gait was long with purpose And against the rising sun, his silhouette wreathed by silver light Cast doom on all who would face him, destroyed their will to fight As terrible as all the night's worst lashings could unfold There was a tempest in his eyes yet more frightening to behold And his heart was wroth, its single thought devoured him inside And a fierce gleam of worked-iron hung long and crisp at his side From no place on earth had that metal blade been pried His helm of black, rune-carved in silver towering high in the air Astride his black horse climbed the warrior so fair, yet ill-used by fate And by other wills, which burned in him, and stoked on high his hate A menace to behold he bade his comrades strength and pride And shot off like and arrow, ploughed through bodies piled high Ever with one goal: And that goal drove the blaze within his heart More than any lust of man to go crashing hard and wild and smart And yet no one would say it, but it showed in their eyes Even as he tore through men and orcs and barely was stilled They should never see his like again, and wept ere he was killed And yet still when the moon rose and the sun fell to sleeping The Mormegil sped on like the furies of hell, drove breaking Sheets of brutal rain and again against foes wrested of will For that sword carved circles in the air - and where it flashed Some head or arm landed there, and screams of the wretched spilled In the smoked-filled air, sounded like trumpets that the fair Might play at the turning tide despite the beast who sought him there And that great worm, whom time had enriched and made bold Within his fat halls of gold and gems, made haste for the ditch He needed but clear ere he felled that grim man, that coward Who had stood on the bridge at Nargothrond and not moved a hand While Finduilas his love marched past with weeping never heard This man he mocked openly once and mastered with words One leap and this "blacksword" would soon pass from the world But Turambar could not be stopped, could not even be slowed The dragon leapt and Túrin's sword to all its hilts was plowed And Glaurung the Great fell with great surprise and bellowed a hideous cry- Whispered a few last words to Túrin then rolled one time and died And black blood runneth everywhere, yet the sword had not expired And Turambar who'd conquered everything he'd ever faced in life, did cry And ripped the sword untarnished from its latest evil prize Upon one knee then Túrin sank and recalled the dragon's words And bade them judge who'd come to mourn him the truth in what he'd heard And wretched was the face of Turambar that day, lumbering away For this miracle lay before the townsfolk that loved him and his Physical body was mended, but upon the cliffs of Taeglin swift With his own fell sword, his life he ended. Hail Túrin! Hail Nienor! They were not responsible for all their endless woe. And Húrin lived to find release and the soil where the body was stowed And his daughter washed into Ulmo's home - he found Morwen his wife and Strength to onward go, undo some work that The Enemy had sown But dying soon too; so passed the blaze of the mightiest warriors Mankind had raised. And in song and in tale they are held to the stars By men and elves alike - Namárië, namárië, Húrin and Turambar!
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A moment ago everything was beautiful? Not in my world it wasn't!! I like the stuff you're posting here though... it is different. Was just passing and thought I'd say hi. I found you by randomly pressing the "next blog" button and up you popped. I keep blogs also, my main one's called http://gledwood2.blogspot.com that's my kind of online journal. I also have 2 new video blogs. Feel free to drop by if you like. Take care and All the best to you from Gledwood "Vol 2"
Thanks Gledwood! It's funny how Blogger works sometimes. I'll get no traffic for weeks and then suddenly within minutes of posting something, I'll get a visitor or even two who leaves comments. Maybe it bumped me up in the queue since I'd just published. Who knows?
Anyways thanks for the nice comments and I will definitely check out your blogs. Keep coming back to see what's new, or delve into my archives - there's over 900 posts on my blog now! I write poetry, essays, and post photographs and art I've done. In between all that, I fill it lyrics, polls and quizzes, youtubes, and other stuff where I try to credit the original author. Usually it's pretty obvious what's mine and what's not.
I didn't actually say anything more on the site, but I believe we talked about it or it was in an email....I also read it to Ginny who was "like wow".
It's hard to know what to say to such a powerful and emotional poem. His anger shows throughout, his determination and strong will are obvious! He's on a quest but cursed, how terrible, yet he kills the beast! His Dad is freed but his family is gone. This is such a sad story...but you told it as well as anyone could less than book length. It's violent, heart-breaking, beautifully written. Huzzah!
4 comments:
A moment ago everything was beautiful? Not in my world it wasn't!!
I like the stuff you're posting here though... it is different.
Was just passing and thought I'd say hi. I found you by randomly pressing the "next blog" button and up you popped. I keep blogs also, my main one's called
http://gledwood2.blogspot.com
that's my kind of online journal. I also have 2 new video blogs. Feel free to drop by if you like.
Take care and
All the best to you
from
Gledwood "Vol 2"
Thanks Gledwood! It's funny how Blogger works sometimes. I'll get no traffic for weeks and then suddenly within minutes of posting something, I'll get a visitor or even two who leaves comments. Maybe it bumped me up in the queue since I'd just published. Who knows?
Anyways thanks for the nice comments and I will definitely check out your blogs. Keep coming back to see what's new, or delve into my archives - there's over 900 posts on my blog now! I write poetry, essays, and post photographs and art I've done. In between all that, I fill it lyrics, polls and quizzes, youtubes, and other stuff where I try to credit the original author. Usually it's pretty obvious what's mine and what's not.
I'm going to go check your blog(s) right now...
Cheers =)
Meta.
Did you write this or is it from the Hurin book? I won't read it until I know.
I didn't actually say anything more on the site, but I believe we talked about it or it was in an email....I also read it to Ginny who was "like wow".
It's hard to know what to say to such a powerful and emotional poem. His anger shows throughout, his determination and strong will are obvious! He's on a quest but cursed, how terrible, yet he kills the beast! His Dad is freed but his family is gone. This is such a sad story...but you told it as well as anyone could less than book length. It's violent, heart-breaking, beautifully written. Huzzah!
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